Nicholes new life

This game is my first game. It is my own idea any similarities to any other game is a coincidence. In this game, you play as Nichole, a high school student, who just turned 18. What does her life await her? It is a work in progress and not done let so please don´t complain about how short it is right now, some links don´t work and just placeholders for now. Tips or suggestions are welcome and any grammar or spelling errors let me know.